Wednesday, October 1, 2008

I Dance ( i want to submit this)

Footprints in the sand make a path. Breeze so soft it is like music dancing. all you hear is water splashing on top of itself. sand crabs dance side to side to get away. little fish swim in schools of ten. my feet gets wet and sinks into the sand. as I go down this long path. I jump into the water, just the right temperture. Looking up at the sky I wonder if god is looking at me. no one is here. Im free to be me. so I dance around here at this smooth beach at night.

1 comment:

Jessica Ramsey said...

you used such great imagery i felt like i was there, and id definetly read more had it been longer! Maybe revise your grammer some though, because grammer mistakes can distract from how smooth and fun it was to read.